That was really helpful of that editor! Usually they don't offer many clues as to why they rejected something, or what you can change to have it accepted. I'm currently workshopping one of my novels with a writing group I'm in, and one of the members mentioned a sentence I'd written that would make a compelling first sentence to the whole novel. She was right, and it's so much stronger because of it.

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